Following the 'uber-crit'. I received this feedback sheet. It's fairly standard as far as feedback sheets go, and I'm pretty pleased with my feedback. It's extremely useful.
I'll be working on the suggests in this sheet, I'm certainly going to be research into Fedrigoni's stock, as that is indeed a priority. I'll also be altering my concept so it's slightly less 'boring'. Perhaps using a different colour for each month, or even, each day might be more appropriate.